Talk:Blog Fiction/@comment-4909372-20120417111819

Blog Fiction group -

Nice start overall on the intro. The history of the genre looks particularly good. I've noticed that some of you have not used any research for your own contribution. That was one of the requirements of the assignment. So before the end of the day, you'll need to change this (for the individuals who did not add.

That "etc." in the first paragraph needs to be fleshed out with details.

So individuals need to revise these points and overall the editor should make this into two or three coherent paragraphs rather than a list of information - shift information around to make this more organized, using transitions where necessary.